there are many different types of music in the world today.why do we need music?is the traditional musci of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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great art,
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universal language, which is extremely bonded with humans for a long time without limiting to
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ethnicity,
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religion
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. Exactly why do we want to
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music
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? Is the
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world
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popular
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more essential than
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own
music
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? I will explain these two perspectives and will elaborate
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idea behind them.
Music
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plays a vital role in day-to-day
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lifestyle while improving their mental and physical well-being. All human
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desire to live a happy life and every day they struggle on achieving that. Despite, rapid development and continuous changing
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the whole
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makes
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people extraordinary busy, keeps them away from
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and isolates from thinking about
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meaning of life.
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, anxiety, depression,
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cases are increasing all over the
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due to the lack of balanced
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mind sets
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.
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,
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have studied
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the effect of
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on human brain activities and it has shown promising results that
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can heel
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brain and can improve
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mental well-being. Physical stability directly correlates with mental health
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healthy mind eventually
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for physical well-being. Apart from that, different
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genres have
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throughout the
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as classical
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hip-pop
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, rock, jazz and many more.
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to those global hits, there
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specific
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related
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cultural, religious, and geographical features depending on various countries. Indeed, the primitive stage of
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music
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was the key
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the development of the current
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music
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, though there are
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popular
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genres,
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own
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as same as important as international
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. In my point of view,
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is exactly essential for
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life, not only considering
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mental well-being but
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regarding the physical aspects.
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country specific
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styles are the forefathers of today's
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world-famous
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world famous
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and we cannot underestimate them.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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