The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The two line charts
depicts
the number of Change the verb form
depict
enrolments
in Australian Universities between 2001 and 2010 inclusive by
overseas and local Change preposition
of
students
. Each charts
holds two separate Change to a singular noun
chart
data
which Correct quantifier usage
pieces of data
includes
the total Correct subject-verb agreement
include
students
enrolled and how many of them are commencing.
Correct quantifier usage
number of students
Overall
, the total enrolment of local students
remain
far high than that of Change the verb form
remains
the
overseas. Correct article usage
apply
Morever
the student count in Correct your spelling
Moreover
local
Correct article usage
the local
students
chart starts from 100000 whereas
for overseas starting at zero.
The total enrolments
by both local and overseas applicants remained in
a positive slope with some scant fluctuations Change preposition
on
inbetween
. The total Correct your spelling
in between
in-between
enrolments
by the non-local students
reached it's
peak in 2010 and it Replace the word
its
was
numbered little more than 800000 ,Unnecessary verb
apply
while
for local students
it was almost 600000 and remained somewhat constant from 2007 to 2010. Overseas enrolments
faced a minor dip in 2003 and then
recovered from 2004. The lowest recorded total enrolment by non-overseas applicants was around 40000 in 2001.
The commencing numbers were increasing gradually in case of overseas applicants over the ten year period starting from around 100000 in 2001 and reaching closer to 420000 in 2010. But the commencing numbers of locals saw considerable fluctuations between 2001 and 2010 and the highest number of commencing recorded for the non-overseas students
was near
230000 .Change the word
nearly
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Vocabulary: Replace the words enrolments, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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