You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: - Explain that you have completed your studies - Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code - Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

Dear Mum and Dad, I received the results from the

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exams today, I passed my final year and I’ll be graduating in a couple of months. They only gave us a maximum of five tickets per family, so I thought I’d write to you

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to let you know the details and

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whom

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to invite. Obviously, I want you two there

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and bring my sister, too. I thought we could give the other two seats to Grandma and Grandad (the

one’s

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on Mum’s side; sorry, Dad). I did try to get extra tickets but there is a limited number of seats that can fit in the room. The ceremony will be held in the main hall of Manchester university on the 4th

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2018. The thing starts at 4pm but you have to be there

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12.30pm for photos and queueing.

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, everyone has to be dressed

formal

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; it’s a black tie event. Let me know if anyone can’t make it. Yours, Jimbob