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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be buld instead. Do you agree or disagree?

#trees #environment #people #areas #cities #towns #facilities #buld
There is no doubt that these days modernity and pollution
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 a huge impact across the globe. Many countries begin to establish more houses and parks for their citizens. Some people claimed that plantation is essential for any nation. Whilst others argued that building residential units is more crucial. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss both of these views and draw my own conclusion On the one hand,
plantation
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 has a major impact on
environment
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the environment
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 by declining the rates of
the
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atmosphere pollution.
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, building parks and
encourage
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 farmers to plant in different areas of the country could be beneficial for
inhabitant's
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inhabitants'
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 health. As a shining example, a recent study has been published by King Saud University states that children who grew
in
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 rural villages have
less
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 health problems than the ones who lived in
capital
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 or main cities. On the other flip of the coin. Some governments
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 to provide residential facilities which
leads
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 to a wide variety of positive consequences.
Firstly
, housing mitigates the overpopulated pressure on the major cities.
Secondly
, it promotes
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plethora of opportunities
to
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low income
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 employees and
labors
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 to find
a suitable houses
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a suitable house
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 for their families.
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, building residential houses and compounds
provide
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 more options
to
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 people and
aid
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 them to purchase their own property. In conclusion,
although
 there is an argument about the importance of the occurrence of forests in
countryside
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the countryside
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 for citizens and
environment
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 ,
while
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another claim says that housing services
is
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 more needed.
Therefore
, I strongly believe that housing
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 numerous reasons to be on the government's priorities list.
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