In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, many people

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believe

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belive

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that both wife and husband have

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responsible

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for making money. Personally, I disagree with these ideas and will outline my reasons in the essay below. On the one hand,

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would like to point out that it can be difficult for one person to put all the responsibility for earning money, especially in

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world's economic crisis.

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, due to the

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the living cost goes up,

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and many

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families have to

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survive

through it with

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thee

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same income.

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, the whole family cannot meet their basic needs

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as food and accommodation if the breadwinner lost

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job. The risk of falling into poverty is higher

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both spouses go to work.

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, there are some drawbacks

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issue.

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, most of today's children are likely to stay with their grandparents

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of getting taken care

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their parents.

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, children

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parenting may have

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morre

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mental problems than those having full of childcare from mother and father. In conclusion,

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there are some drawbacks

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the advantages

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outweigh

the disadvantages. I completely agree that both spouses need to work for

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strong financial condition.

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, they need to make sure about the good health of their children.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

209 words

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