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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, many people
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belive
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believe
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 that both wife and husband have
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responsible
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 for making money. Personally, I disagree with these ideas and will outline my reasons in the essay below. On the one hand,
i
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 would like to point out that it can be difficult for one person to put all the responsibility for earning money, especially in
this
 world's economic crisis.
Moreover
, due to the
pandemic
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 the living cost goes up,
many
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and many
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 families have to
survire
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survive
 through it with
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thee
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 same income.
For example
, the whole family cannot meet their basic needs
such
 as food and accommodation if the breadwinner lost
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 job. The risk of falling into poverty is higher
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 both spouses go to work.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks
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this
 issue.
Fist
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, most of today's children are likely to stay with their grandparents
instead
 of getting taken care
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 their parents.
Besides
, children
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 parenting may have
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more
morre
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more
 mental problems than those having full of childcare from mother and father. In conclusion,
although
 there are some drawbacks
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the advantages
outweight
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outweigh
 the disadvantages. I completely agree that both spouses need to work for
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 strong financial condition.
In addition
, they need to make sure about the good health of their children.
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