You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser expressing your interest in the role requesting more information about it explaining what experience you have Write at least 150 words

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Jone, I am writing
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letter to let you know,
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have
one month
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training program in
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the UK
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and my ID number is 335435 . I have knew that
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you want of
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an organiser
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organiser
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to
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the social event that will be in
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month.l am interesting to play
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role . As you know, each event has scheduled
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start and finish time and many programs to be more
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. I would like to know all information about it.
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in my university and have good experience to select me. I look forward to hearing your response. With my faithfully, Taha Abdul
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expressing interest
  • enthusiastic
  • responsibilities
  • expectations
  • relevant experience
  • suitability
  • organise
  • co-ordinate
  • engage
  • social activities
  • detailed information
  • demonstrate proficiency
  • prior experience
  • effective communication
  • successful events
  • team collaboration
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