Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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As heavy
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and residential problems have been around for the
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decades, there are some
companies
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that decide to
move
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their human resources and physical properties to rural areas.
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, some
companies
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still stay in the large cities due to some reasons
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as high expenses.
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essay will discuss why I agree and disagree
companies
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have to
move
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to the
countryside
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for each reason.
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of all, moving
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to the outside of large cities are absolutely able to tackle the issues for the transits and residences.
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is because most
companies
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occupy massive lands to produce their products efficiently.
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, in order not only to receive raw resources to make their product but
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to distribute their completed products across the country, it is necessary for factories to have enough capacity to absorb heavy
traffic
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streams. All things are considered, I came to the conclusion that residential areas can be secured and
traffic
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streams will be declined if
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move
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out to the
countryside
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.
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, the city council in Seoul, South Korea decides to encourage a company that produces semen to
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out of Seoul. The reasons are to occupy the residential area enough to ingest growing populations and to prevent from influxing big size mobilities.
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,
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moving
companies
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is possible to tackle
traffic
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and housing problems, pollution is caused in the
countryside
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.
Companies
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inevitably make air, water and noise pollution on a regular basis.
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means that the residents living in the
countryside
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are in a place where their physical and mental problems are exposed on a daily basis.
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, many trees in the mountain will be cut off to set up
companies
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' properties.
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will have detrimental impacts on ecosystems in the
countryside
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such
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as wild animals. According to a study from one of the environmental institutions in the Government of the Republic of Korea, the number of wild foxes has been decreasing over the
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5 years as the foxes' shelters are destroyed due to securing the
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' lands. In summary, it is undeniable fact that relocating
companies
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have benefits in terms of the reduction of the transport streams and the increase of the residential districts.
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, it can cause bad impacts on people and ecosystems in the
countryside
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with a variety of pollutions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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