In today's world, companies seek to keep the happiness level of their employees high through salary, health care and holiday packages. Can such measures make employees happy?

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In today's, world companies are facing a big issue with employee retention rate

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helps to determine how stable the employees are in the company

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how many people are staying in the company without leaving frequently. In

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, paragraph I'll be discussing the measures taken by companies affect it and will they motivate employees to stick to the same company rather than switch to another. To start companies today are offering more incentives and rewards to keep their employee retention rate higher and

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offering holiday trips

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they are providing health checkups every month

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was not the case in the past. Yet still, the employees are switching from one organisation to another the main reason for

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is lack of work-life balance

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if we work in a big MNC club like Amazon India they give good incentives and health-care but coming to work it's so huge and can't be completed in time so at

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situation, people do over-time

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we lose sleep and gain health problems and stress so

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is the reason for people leaving the association. The solution for

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issue is the organisation should make sure that work-life balance

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by reducing the work pressure on the staff.

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, the organisation team should make some motivating activities where pupils should get more interactive with each other.

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H.R team should make sure that the job can be done in any place

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the job can be done at the home or while travelling on trips. To conclude the H.R managers should make sure to know what are the issues with the staff and try to resolve them in order to have a good retention rate

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In today's world, companies seek to keep the happiness level of their employees high through salary, health care and holiday packages. Can such measures make employees happy?

Your opinion

Some individuals argue that children should always heed the advice given by their parents, while others believe that children should make decisions independently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

"Prevention is better than a cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

Influence of human beings on the world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solution can you suggest?