The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.

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There is a widespread phenomenon ,the growth of tourism will cause the
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dialect to become the most paramount globally. Some individuals believe
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will result in it being spoken exclusively nationwide.
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of all effective communication is one of the many reasons people believe tourism is helping the
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to be important. With easy communication, foreigners will feel free to move without any fear of being isolated. They can ask for help when need be and be easily assisted because it would be understood
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improving socialization.
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, international trade will be promoted. Traders bringing their products from other countries will be
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with their buyers as they understand themselves well to bargain.
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, a lot of people will bring their goods since they know a better market awaits them.
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in a recent interview with the trade minister, it was revealed that Ghanaians obtain good value for their goods when they take
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to Nigeria because both of them can understand themselves Despite effective communication and improvement in international trade,
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becoming the sole spoken
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cannot go without a challenge and one of them is
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of our indigenous dialects and heritage.Most people will abandon their local dialect and culture
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that with time their way of dressing, talking and mannerisms is what will be adopted. In view of
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, our cherished
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and culture will be forgotten
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generation and go into extinction.
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in an interview with the education ministry, it was revealed that, with the use of the
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in teaching and learning, about 65% of the Ghanaian children are not able to interact with their mother tongue gradually causing the
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to fade away. In conclusion, after considering the merits and demerits of
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occurrence, it is felt that the ups far outweigh the downs. I will
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recommend that
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becomes the famous dialect spoken globally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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