Nowadays, International Tourism is one of the biggest industries in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In the contemporary world, tourism around the globe is one of the most demanded industries. While it is growing, there is a statement, that it can affect the interaction among nations badly,
such
as understanding each other due to cultural diversity. In my opinion, this
claim is totally wrong. In this
essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.
To begin
with, travelling affects people more positively, travellers can see beautiful places, see the
nature and taste delicious of particular countries which they visit. Correct article usage
apply
This
activity help to
the individual to see the world from different angles and be impressed by discoveries, which they even could not imagine. Change preposition
apply
For example
, when European tourists visit Asian countries, they can visit unusual for them historic places, plants which are growing in only particular places, food which they never tried and interact with people in order to learn more about their culture. All this
is complex, helps
the visitors to broaden their perception of life and growth their insights about human beings.
Travelling to different countries Correct word choice
and helps
beneficial
not only to the touristAdd a missing verb
is beneficial
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
for locals, who are not familiar with hospitality and the understanding of the different type
of lifestyles. Fix the agreement mistake
types
For example
, in my country, for the last
20 years, the tourism industry trying to involve locals to
gather with foreigners in different kinds of events, like concerts, conversation clubs and etc. Fix the infinitive
apply
This
help both sides to make new friends, learn something new from each otherCorrect quantifier usage
apply
such
, and reveal opportunities which might help the locals in
Change preposition
apply
enhance
their life for Change the verb form
enhancing
better
.
In conclusion, I strongly believe, that international tourism has a great positive impact on people around the world, change their understanding of life, teaches them to respect all cultures and helps exchange impressions.Correct article usage
the better
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