IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5.5

Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the website.

#friend #website #business #description #you’d #images
Dear Evi, How are you? I hope you and John are doing well. I can’t believe it’s been 2 years since our
last
 vacation together! I have been really busy with the new shop and thanks to word of mouth, sales are going great! In fact, I have even decided to have a website created for the store. Would you be interested in creating the
site
 for me? As you know, my store sells handmade silver
jewelry
Change the spelling
jewellery
show examples
. I have extended the range of products to include other handmade items like ceramic figurines. I want the
site
 to really capture the feeling of the store, which as you probably remember is kind of exotic, with souvenirs from my travels around the world. Since I update my merchandise regularly, the
site
 will need to reflect that. I have recently bought a very
high quality
Add a hyphen
high-quality
show examples
 camera and some studio equipment so I am able to photograph the products myself. I just need you to set the
site
 up and upload new photographs as they become available. Do you think you can do
this
? I’d love to hear your thoughts! Of course, I don't expect you to work for free; you'll have to charge me what you would charge any client, regardless of our friendship. I am really excited
for
Change preposition
about
show examples
this
 new adventure. I hope to hear from you soon!
Submitted by furkan_fener_03 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: