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It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. They are less distracted and this leads to better results. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some humans argue that it is better for male and female students to study separately than study in mixed-sex
classes
 due to they may be less distracted and get more advanced results. In my experience, I totally oppose the argument because of some pros and cons. There are two major advantages due to students studying in separate sex
classes
. One advantage is that each
gender
 has some talents
such
 as boys are good at math, girls are good at art. Another advantage is that because of the same
gender
, they communicate easily, and
also
 can talk about specific topics. In spite of the advantages mentioned above, there are a lot of negative consequences of unisex
classes
.
Firstly
, because of insufficient communication and discussion, students become unconfident when they want to deal with different
gender
 problems.
Secondly
, nowadays education targets all aspects but unisex
classes
 tend to improve specific advances of each
gender
. In conclusion,
although
 unisex
classes
 may have some pros which I mention above, there are a lot of drawbacks. I completely oppose the statement.
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