You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meeting Write at least 150 words

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Dear

neighbours

, I have written that letter to

decusse

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discuss

the problem's about the parking area. Recently,

There

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are some

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apply

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neighbours

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the neighbours

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have more than a car and

also

have

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truck that why we have not enough space in our garage. In the

first

place,I would like to explain

for

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all my

neighbours

that, each apartment has one parking for one car.

Secondly

, some

neighbours

have put old things .

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, some

children'

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bicycles .For that, I ask them to take out it

from

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garage

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the garage

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Thirdly

, some

neighbours

do not stop in

right

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line and

some time

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take place for two cars .

Finally

, I hope

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all my

neighbours

to accept my invitation

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WhatsApp to arrange with each other

the

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good time for all to

meeting

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in my home to discuss

about

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all

problem

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problems

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that we have met until now. With best wishes, Taha Tawfik

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

145 words

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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meeting Write at least 150 words

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It is not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. Do you agree or disagree?

The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or country into the city center. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?