Some people say that it is possilble to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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By looking at the
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someone wears, sometimes it is possible to have an idea about a person`s background. Some people believe that a certain person`s cultural background and characteristics could be possible to read from their fashion style.
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essay will argue, in most cases, why It is impossible to identify a person`s characteristics from what they wear. To a certain extent, it is possible to read a person from their fashion choices. We could still witness that people in certain countries tend to wear
clothes
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which are unique to their own country.
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, Indians love to wear sarees for special occasions and men in Sri Lanka like to wear sarongs for day-to-day outings. Because of that, it is somewhat possible for people to guess the culture of their country and sometimes the person's behaviour too.
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, we could see certain Muslim countries won`t allow women to wear
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which exposed their skin.
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, in Arab, it is a must that you wear a hijab if you are a woman.
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, women, in
such
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countries are very shy to open up as well as reluctant to discover the world by themselves. These are a few reasons which we could possibly understand a person from their
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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