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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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The diagrams illustrate the current and future layouts of an industrial area in Norbiton. As is shown clearly in the maps, it can be found that there will be a total of eight significant changes
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 to
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 place. The most noticeable
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 relates to the construction of
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. Looking at the graphs in detail, there is a roundabout in the centre and five factories are standing across the path which extends
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further
 east.
However
, they will be replaced by three housing areas,
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 playground and
one
 school
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plan. A medical centre, shops and the other three housing areas will be built in the original place of three factories which near the roundabout. It is worthy to note that a small roundabout will be
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 to the south of the big
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. Apart from the changes in
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 of the river, a bridge jutting over the river to connect the south and north of the industrial area is
also
 a part of the plan.
Moreover
, a strip of housing area will be built in the place of farmland.
As a result
, the farmland decreases in size to almost half of its current size.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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