Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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It is argued among professionalists that children should begin learning
second
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or
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languages
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elementary
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than in middle
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.
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essay will demonstrate how studying
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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at a very young age can help students acquire information more efficient but will
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show that there are difficulties in finding a teacher for
young
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a young
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student
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students
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.
Although
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this
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issue is a significant one, the essay argues that the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages. Kids are believed to have the ability to learn faster and easier. They have good memories
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can remember and recall things that are taught in class effortlessly. They
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have better
pronounciation
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pronunciation
and intonation when speaking since their tongue is not fully grown yet.
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, if we hurry
taught
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other languages
for
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student
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students
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, they would have a chance to develop other skills,
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,
critical-thinking
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critical thinking
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, problem-solving, and so on, and they will get to learn about other cultures and histories since one's
country
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country's
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language
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can reflect in many aspects.
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, there are not many
language
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teachers for youngsters in academic fields. Mostly, professors are trained just only to teach in
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a university
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or in high
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. If we want to change
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systems for little
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,
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might cause
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trouble for
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intuition
instruction
instuition
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institutions
in finding instructors. Even if they do get some tutors to teach kids, those tutors might not be qualified enough and might end up giving wrong
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information
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to children. To conclude,
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it is difficult to find educators for students in elementary
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that have an expertise in
language
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, teaching children since primary
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greatly helps kids improve many skills for them and
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provide
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more appreciation
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of
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culture
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the culture
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and history of other countries.
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, the positive effects definitely outweigh the drawbacks.
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