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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skill. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions.

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Nowadays, companies find out that the new employees
lack
 essential skills, communicating with others and cooperating with the team. It is caused by the system of
education
 paying attention to
academics
 and the hiring progress in the business and those problems can be tackled by altering of school's extracurricular activities and companies' selection programs.
To begin
 with,
firstly
, the system of
education
 is focused on
academics
, which achieve high scores as well as master subjects, and plenty of
students
 concentrate on their
academics
, they
lack
 opportunities to leaning team spirit.
Secondly
, numerous businesses hire new workers through their relative subjects, who had mastered the higher achievement.
Moreover
,
students
 for work in a dream business will spend plentiful time on their studies, as businesses only care about their achievement.
Therefore
, due to the system of
education
 and the methods for businesses to select new employees,
it
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forces
students
 to pay massive attention
on
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academics
. In order to tackle those problems.
Firstly
, schools create extracurricular activities, sports, dance and music competitions, which help
students
 gain more chances to learn team spirit, or the debate events, which develop their communication.
Secondly
, employees’ hire progress should be altered. Not only look for who has high master subjects but
also
 need to use communication for choice.
Thus
, new workers who
lack
 essential skills can be solved by adding extracurricular activities and changing employees’ hiring rules. To summarise, insufficient
education
 structure and hiring worker rules create those people who
lack
 fundamental ability. While tackling those issues can start
from
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 improving extracurricular and new workers selection rules in companies.
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