Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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There is no doubt that these days that the

travel

with

people

become increasing. The question is, is it better to

travel

with different

people

included

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tourist

guider

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guide

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? In

this

essay

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I am going to write my own opinion and draw a conclusion. In terms of

advantage

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advantages

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travel

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travelling

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with

tourist

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a tourist

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guider

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guide

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is the best way to

travel

. The main reason

given

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to support

this

that

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is that

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tour

guide

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apply

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has

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vast experience, and he knows multiple places to

visit

. To illustrate, if you

travel

with

group

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a group

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included

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including

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your

tourist

guide

you will get a good managing time so, everything is

schedule

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on the time

also

, you will get a huge place to

visit

however

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, they will learn about culture from each other.

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the other hand,

tourist

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a tourist

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is for helping

people

to keep providing to be knowledgeable.

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tourist

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tourists

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given

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are given

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information and structure about some

museum

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museums

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, but it is not necessary to follow them.

Finally

travel

with

people

and

tour

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a tour

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guide

makes your

travel

secure

However

, there are disadvantages of transporting with

tour

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a tour

the tour

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guide

First

of all, there are some places most

people

don’t like

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apply

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especially young

people

such

as,

visit

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visiting

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museums and art

gallery

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galleries

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In addition

to that travelling with different

nation

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nations

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mostly

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is mostly

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not good because there will be a clash of

culture

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cultures

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Also

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travel

alone makes you discover the traditional ways in that country that you

visit

. In conclusion, travelling with a

tour

guide

is the best way to discover new places and multiple traditional

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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

A lot of places in the word rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?