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Some experts claim that it is important to teach children the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some professionals suggest that teaching children handwriting
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 is crucial. I partly agree with
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 opinion. Handwriting
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 can bring them many benefits.
Firstly
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clear handwriting, other people will be able to read their text easier. If they are doing paper tasks that
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 writing, whether it is an essay or just ordinary assignments, teachers won't have to spend much time understanding what you wrote down, and possibly will correct or help you more quickly.
A fine
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 handwriting will save many complicated processes,
hence
 saving lots of time. Good handwriting plays an important role in education, even in everyday life. While acquiring
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decent handwriting is significant, parents and
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 should not specialize too much in it. I believe that
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 can only get to some specific degrees, and won't improve
further
. Some standards require kids to get
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perfect handwriting, but most of them are not capable of achieving a tidy one. It is best for them to focus more on other fields, at the same time raising their abilities
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 handwriting to their limits. In conclusion, it's necessary to acquire
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decent handwriting, because it indirectly helps you with many problems. Whereas considering focusing on other fields is
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 crucial.
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