You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaints

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter for a
compliant
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complaint
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which I recently
facing
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faced
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in your
hotel
. I think you should take corrective action to resolve
this
issue.
Organisation
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The organisation
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meeting is held in your
hotel
at the Sahyadri
hotel
Mumbai location. Company top management team in your
hotel
and we had aborded in the room from
last
1 day. There are so many basic problems with your maintenance department. Neither in my room only, other my colleagues were facing
same
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issue.
Firstly
, the problem is hot
water
in
bathroom
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the bathroom
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not
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available, as you knew that the outside weather is
to
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too
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cold, so cannot take bath as well as playground soil is
to
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too
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muddy,
peoples
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people
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not able to play sports activity and
swimming
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the swimming
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pool
to
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too
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dirty, lot of fungus in the
water
pool. Company peoples are very disappointed with your service. We are still here for
next
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the next
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four days, I hope you will take action and will do maintenance work by today. Clean
water
pool, repair hot
water
geyser and ground in better condition. Hope to see a positive response Yours Faithfully Rohit Marked.
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