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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

#doctors #nurses #teacher #contribution #society #entertainment #sport #celebrities
Education and
health
services
,
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 are the most essential factors in
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today's
todays
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 world because of the
distributions
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 of technology and
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diseases
deaseases
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diseases
. I strongly agree with the theory of replacing the salary amount of doctors, nurses and
teachers
 with
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celebrities in other firms.
Generaly
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Generally
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, in
last
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 few years, everybody
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realized
relized
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realised
 the importance of
health
services
, especially, when almost 219 countries went on a
qurantine
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quarantine
quarantined
.
teachers
also
 were responsible for the education of students to be aware of
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a pandemic
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pandemic
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Health
services
, and
teachers
 have to
work
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indiviuall
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individually
individual
 and
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group
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. There are different materials in their
work
 which make their
work
 so
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sensitive
sensetive
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sensitive
.
Moreover
, what
teachers
 have to build is the base of the building, which
contribute
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 to
higher
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 level and
finally
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 the full building which
represent
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 the society
is stands
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 on what they learned. Even though
,
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casual celebrities, singers, actors and etc, are talented people and famous,
but
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what they do is not an essential
things
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 that lack of it, might make issues in society. They help the culture,
history
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and history
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 and amuse people, but what
health
services
 do cannot compare to them. To sum up,
health
services
,
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 and
teachers
 have to get paid more than every other occupation in countries because they
work
 for our lives and sometimes they ruined their life for us, but
unfortunalty
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unfortunately
nowasyas
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nowadays
 nobody
cant
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can
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 price an
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achievement
achivement
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achievement
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • critical role
  • healthcare professionals
  • societal well-being
  • disparity in income
  • skewed values
  • essential services
  • remuneration
  • mitigate
  • global shortages
  • inherent value
  • nurturing
  • compensation
  • societal contributions
  • profound impact
  • equitable distribution
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