Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Humans are planning different ways to earn good money and secure their families. A section of society holds a notion that running
one
's own Use synonyms
business
is safer than working under some organisations. Use synonyms
Although
in own Linking Words
business
Use synonyms
one
is his own boss and can plan the revenue Use synonyms
accordingly
, working under a reputed Linking Words
firm
could ensure income stability in case of some unforeseen circumstances. In my opinion, I strongly believe that a person must Use synonyms
work
under a bigger Use synonyms
firm
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, there are myriads of reasons why individuals prefer self-run businesses. Linking Words
First
and foremost, due to no time constraints in working under Linking Words
one
's own Use synonyms
business
. As Use synonyms
one
can plan the Use synonyms
work
according to their own schedule, because of no accountability to others. Use synonyms
For example
, a person running his own shop can reach the place anytime during the day by completing other household Linking Words
work
or personal assignments, if any. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
one
is the boss of his own company, Use synonyms
hence
can plan the profit of the Linking Words
firm
Use synonyms
accordingly
. Linking Words
Although
revenue depends upon various market factors like demand, an entrepreneur can Linking Words
work
and get the task completed as per the demand of their products and can earn desired income. Use synonyms
Moreover
, various decisions regarding a change in production or modification in existing lines of product can be made on their own. To exemplify, involving other staff to Linking Words
work
overtime for completing some bigger market orders can help businessmen to earn more profit and can procure new assignments Use synonyms
also
.
Linking Words
On the contrary
, there are Linking Words
also
numerous reasons why people prefer working in some renowned organizations. Linking Words
Firstly
, it ensures the stability of income for the family. Since there are lots of ups and downs in the market due to various factors like inflation and demand, a salaried person can get fixed remuneration on a monthly basis despite all these factors. To exemplify, in the economic crisis of the year 2008, almost all smaller businesses failed, Linking Words
however
, people working in bigger firms survived due to receiving a continuous monthly salary. Linking Words
Lastly
, working in a renowned Linking Words
firm
Use synonyms
also
provides multiple other benefits as well. An employee can get group medical insurance, leased accommodation facility and many more extra benefits if the cash flow of the Linking Words
firm
is strong. Use synonyms
Therefore
, due to all these reasons, many individuals prefer working in some reputed companies.
To conclude, despite, having no time constraints of working under own Linking Words
business
, I believe that a human must get recruitment by a renowned company because of having numerous other benefits Use synonyms
such
as a health insurance policy, a facility of leased accommodation and many more.Linking Words
Submitted by kirnu0216 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.