Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people assume that all
university
students should be granted to
study
whatever they desire.
However
, others think that they should be consented to learn
subjects
that can have benefits
on
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the future,
such
as those associated with
science
and
technology
. ​On the one hand, elders should pay respect to their decisions and they are mature enough to identify their lives. Not only their decisions but
also
their hobbies should not be controlled drastically because they are over 18 years old.
Moreover
, they can have
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possibility to
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their ideas
basing
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on their interests. Only if they are interested in the
subjects
they are studying, their lives will be both meaningful and successful.
Although
how many opportunities the
subjects
which they are not interested in
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offer, they will reluctant to grab these chances.
For example
,
university
students who got low marks in matriculation
exam
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are allowed to attend the
subjects
which are biology and Myanmar
although
they do not want to
study
. Only if they are not only delighted but
also
interested to learn, their lives will be successful step by step. ​
On the other hand
, they should be granted to
study
the
subjects
such
as
science
and
technology
because these
subjects
play important roles
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these days and they can get
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a job
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job
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without difficulty.
Moreover
, every student should be taught the
basic
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basics
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of
the
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science
and
technology
when they are in high school graduate. After that, they need to specialize
these
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subjects
when they attend
the
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university
. And
then
, the invention of
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science
and
technology
are involved in daily life
such
as cars, smartphones and microwaves.
Therefore
, they should contact regularly these
subjects
. After graduating from
university
, there will be many companies which welcome
to
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them if they are excellent at
science
and
technology
.
Subsequently
, the salaries of the scientists and technologists are the highest wages compared to other jobs
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these days. ​In conclusion, to my way of thinking, I prefer to
study
what I wish to
study
the
subjects
that will be valuable in the future as I am a teenager who
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my own decision and believe
my
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enthusiasm.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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