Some people think traffic and housing problems in large cities can be solved by moving companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the this statement.

It is true that the prominent reason

of

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traffic

jam

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and lack of housing in big

cities

come

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from

exisiting

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existing

of factories and

companies

there,

therefore

public

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the public

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may think that the obvious solution for

this

problem

by

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moving

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these out of the capital to the countryside and rural areas. I profoundly support

this

point of view for several reasons. On one hand, giant

companies

and large factories consider

this

issue as a life or death matter, simply because they need to be in the major

cities

for economic purposes,

firstly

, they have all

required

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resources which might

be

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not

exisiting

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existing

in

countryside

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,

secondly

, the transactions of import and export are much easier,

moreover

, being in major

cities

opens more

investing

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opportunities for these

companies

and diminish the cost of transportation and logistics.

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the other hand, if the governments are serious

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encountering the critical

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challenges

challanges

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challenges

in major

cities

, they should take

this

proposal into consideration. Moving

factoires

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factories

to the rural areas

not

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only the solution for traffic

jam

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jams

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and housing

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problems

porblems

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problems

but

also

will create more job opportunities in these territories,

therefore

the rate of

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unemployment

unemployemnt

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unemployment

will decrease,

furthermore

, it enhances the standards of living in these poor provinces.

This

detrimental phenomenon of leaving

counrtysides

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countrysides

countryside

without development and economic support

,

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would lead us to immense problems in the future we will not be able to face. In conclusion, we must take an action and support all governmental efforts to move

companies

and factories gradually to the countryside