Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:  Say why you would like to go on the trip  Suggest what you could do to help during the trip  Ask other questions about the trip

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Dear Ms/Mrs Smith, I am Angelica Dy, mother of James Dy, I am writing

this

letter to enquire from you the recent announcement of the school that they will have a three-day trip to Japan

month. After hearing it, I'm worried for my son, knowing it will be his

first

time travelling to a different country without his parents by his side. I'm aware that you're allowing parents to come along to the tour, in that case, I want to volunteer myself. I've been to Japan multiple times

last

year, more or less I know their famous tourist spot and cusine, add to that, I can understand and speak their language, so communicating with the locals won't be a problem. Do let me know the specific time and date of the outing in order for me to fix my schedule ahead of time.

Furthermore

, I want to know the accommodation they have during their stay and things to bring along for the activity. Thank you in advance for the reply, I look forward to hearing from you at you're earliest. Yours truly, Angelica

Submitted by angelica on Wed Jul 27 2022

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

184 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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