Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:  Say why you would like to go on the trip  Suggest what you could do to help during the trip  Ask other questions about the trip

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Dear Ms/Mrs Smith, I am Angelica Dy, mother of James Dy, I am writing
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letter to enquire from you the recent announcement of the school that they will have a three-day trip to Japan
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month. After hearing it, I'm worried for my son, knowing it will be his
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time travelling to a different country without his parents by his side. I'm aware that you're allowing parents to come along to the tour, in that case, I want to volunteer myself. I've been to Japan multiple times
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year, more or less I know their famous tourist spot and cusine, add to that, I can understand and speak their language, so communicating with the locals won't be a problem. Do let me know the specific time and date of the outing in order for me to fix my schedule ahead of time.
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, I want to know the accommodation they have during their stay and things to bring along for the activity. Thank you in advance for the reply, I look forward to hearing from you at you're earliest. Yours truly, Angelica
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enthusiastic
  • valuable experience
  • expertise
  • educational objectives
  • supervision
  • ensure safety
  • bonding
  • workshops
  • logistics
  • coordinates
  • travel arrangements
  • clear communication
  • support
  • responsibilities
  • manage schedules
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