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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or an organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of self employment

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Nowadays many
people
 take the path to self-employment
instead
 of having a job, which is dependent on a large company or an organisation. Many reasons and many downsides of
this
 manner can be addressed There are some possible explanations for
this
.
Firstly
, by the impact of the modern-day lifestyle, many folks barely have an opportunity to work for a big corporation. Qualifications might be too harsh for them,
for example
, a company requires
people
 to have a decent education degree.
Therefore
, many
people
 failed to apply for big businesses, and a number of them decided to become self-employed.
Secondly
, A lot of
people
 prefer going their own way as well. When a person has a talent that wouldn't suit any great company, he will have to work for himself. There are multiple occupations that need independence,
such
 as tutoring, or maybe lawyer. There are
also
 unfortunate disadvantages of self-employment. One of them is that you must pay all fees and costs for your own project because you do not rely on any bigger organisations.
Additionally
, it requires harder work, you won't have specified tasks given to you, but you will have to look for customers or partnerships on your own.
Consequently
, it will be very tough to handle everything by yourself. In conclusion, a large number of individuals now choose to be self-employed because of difficulties being employed by larger businesses. And there are many drawbacks to self-employment as well.
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