The use of mobile phones in public areas is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places, so  mobile phones should be banned in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dear Department of Children and Youth I, Duangjai Lothaisong, graduated from Mahasarakham university, during studying I got a chance to stay in

Sydney

for a month in 2017,

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I took a short English course at The University of

Sydney

. Nowadays, I have been working

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Hotel Reception for almost 3 years at STAY Hotel, Bangkok. After working for a while, I feel very tired, not physically but mentally.

Thus

, I found out about the program a couple of years ago when

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hashtag(#ย้ายประเทศกันเถอะ) had been created. I spent lots of time searching for

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qualification

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details the authorities needed and preparing myself to be one of the appropriate applicants. My itinerary will be divided

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three chapters because I desire to know their culture and

travel

to discover many unseen cities that I never know.

Firstly

, If I quickly get a visa in October, I will be ready to go around November

this

year. After arriving, I will live with my friend in

Sydney

for a week and find hospitality jobs that I think would be similar to my current work. As I researched, the hospitality jobs that suit my skill would be casual dining and events staff,

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staff. So, if I get a job, I will find my own accommodation near my workplace. While living there, I will

travel

to all destination points that I have never been there in New South Wales,

such

as Hunter Valley and Coffs Harbor.

Secondly

, I will go to Tasmania, Hobart, which is an island state of Australia to

travel

there for around 2 months and work casual jobs because I have my dream to

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to Mona, Flinders Island, Wineglass Bay and hike at Cradle Mountain-Lake St. Clair National Park which is one of Tasmania's tourism treasures and

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nirvana for nature lovers. During the winter months (June – August), I will go back to

Sydney

to do various activities,

such

as joining Captain Cook’s crew to watch some whales, outdoor ice-skating around the city and skiing in Charlotte Pass, Kosciuszko National Park, which is the highest and oldest ski resort in Australia. I believe that I can improve my English skills on a daily basis.

Moreover

, Australia is a multicultural country that I can learn about its cultural diversity to adopt in daily life when I come back to Thailand.

Lastly

, the Work and Holiday program would give me the best opportunity to explore the bigger world than I know, particularly how to survive when living abroad alone. Best Regards, Duangjai Lothaisong (Applicant)