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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #lives #changes #change
In
this
 hi-tech society, many believe having the same thing is better than changing their lives by doing something unique.
However
, other mostly youngsters’ points of view are different, and they have faith to
change
 their work and lifestyle by doing various tasks. I want to discuss
both
 aspects in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, there is an argument between all generations that some believe doing
same
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 work they become habitual of it because they spent a long time with their job, they were happy and not tolerate any new development.
However
, they completely ignored the outcome, and they are feasible. On the one hand, those who want to avoid new technology most of them older citizens,
also
 feel under pressure because it is not easy to learn any
advancement
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 skills at the old stage.
Although
 it is only a myth, they worry about too much. We had several examples
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that
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which
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 quite a lot of ones changed their mindset and agreed to
change
 their thoughts and accept world developments.
On the other hand
, most agreed that
change
 is good
to learn
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 many new advancements and policies.
Moreover
, many populaces have a different opinion about
this
change
, they decided not to
change
 their social life because stuck with the same thing they feel reliability, and they do not want to lose it. They prefer stability
instead
 of an adventurous life. As far as I am concerned, they might
utterly
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 monotonous.
Whereas
 the youngsters prefer
change
 because they are curious about new techniques, and they
also
 want to learn and apply these policies in their workplaces. As we know everyone engages with the internet, and most jobs have mandatory strategies to the person must have computer skills. By changing, job inhabitants are getting more
experiences
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experience
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 rather than those who do not belong to
change
.
In addition
, indeed,
both
 are right because
some
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 of them who cannot learn and
change
 their lifestyle, it is better for them to stay in the same place. I agree with
both
 temperament communities because they
both
 are right.
Nevertheless
, those people who prefer advancement, are more successful in many ways but many opportunities who have positivity there is some negativity as well, and we can not blame anyone.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • hesitancy
  • risk-taking
  • transitions
  • enrichment
  • equilibrium
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