Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People hold conflicting views about higher education between young

students

and learners

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all ages with their school performance. It is believed that senior

students

who achieve

highest

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marks in an entrance

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exam

should be offered to

universities

,

while

another school of thought holds that it is acceptable for all

students

regarless

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regardless

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ages

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and their study results. In

this

essay, I am going to

eclucidate

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elucidate

both viewpoints, before clarifying why I lean towards the former. On the one hand, it is understandable why all

students

should have a fair chance of entering college no matter how their results are. In fact, some

students

who live under the

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poverty

line need

to

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support for their whole

family

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finance so they can not completely concentrate on their studies, resulting in getting unexpected scores,

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failing their exams. Despite some difficulties, these

students

still continue to

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pursue

their passion by enrolling

college

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courses.

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that,

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performance of all aged

students

can not reflect their scholarly competence in the future because they can totally achieve their goal especially related to their natural capacity and forte as well.

For example

, many Vietnamese

universities

allow all

students

to take part in an entrance examination to evaluate their ability as a fair opportunity.

On the other hand

, despite the aforementioned benefits, I would contend that concerns regarding young

students

with remarkable achievements seem more justifiable. One major rationale is that these

students

are usually intelligent and hard-working so they richly deserve to be accepted into

universities

.

This

can be attributed to the fact that

students

have allocated their whole time

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studying with a sense of

detemination

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determination

and

perserverance

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perseverance

. If senior

students

have not concentrated on their studies, they would have not acquired the knowledge well, which could directly affect their receptive ability when going to

universities

. Another driving factor is that well-educated

students

will be get high-paid

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more easily in

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knowledge-based society.

For instance

, most

of

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the

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companies

reqire

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require

applicants to be good at both professional knowledge and individual skills in order to comprehend the cutting-edge technology that can enhance the

proficency

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proficiency

and bring

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revenue for their companies. In conclusion,

although

accepting

students

of all ages to go to

universities

could be

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beneficial

, I am of the opinion that it would be imprudent to discount the importance of

offerring

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offering

young

students

with excellent performance to create higher quality

generation

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in the labor market.