You just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter - correction the information in the article - explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about misinformation about my town, which was published in your
magazine
, The Sunday Times, last
Sunday, 18th July 2022. Firstly
, I must say that the article about Al-Aqsa
Mosque
, Palestine, was very well written, and it contained detailed information about the history of our city and the mosque
.
The mistake that the editor made in the article is the wrong location of the mosque
. The mosque
which is mentioned as Al-Aqsa
Mosque
in your magazine
is not the Al-Aqsa
Mosque
. Furthermore
, the pictures shown are also
of the wrong mosque
, and they need to be removed or corrected.
This
is so important to correct because Al-Aqsa
Mosque
holds a strong cultural and religious importance for us, Palestinians, as well as Muslims in general. Furthermore
, it will lead all the readers of your magazine
to the wrong mosque
, and they will not be able to perform the intended religious obligations which they need to offer in Al-Aqsa
Mosque
.
Therefore
, I, on behalf of my town, am requesting you to replace the wrong location with the correct location of the mosque
. I know the correction will require a huge amount of work for the editors and publishers of your magazine
, but it will result in an overall increase in confidence in "The Sunday Times" for its diligent work.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Umair Khurshid SiddiquiSubmitted by chemicalumair on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite