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Some people believe that it's good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, businesses and academic worlds. Others believe that some information is so important and valuable to be shared freely . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Technically, sharing of
information
 plays a vital part in our lives. Some people believe that
information
 should be shared freely, but others are of the view that important and valuable
information
 should not be shared freely.
This
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the pros and cons of
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both views. Sharing of
information
 for scientific research, businesses and academic purpose
has
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it's
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 own benefits.
Firstly
,
scientist
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the scientist
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 uses free
information
 to make new discoveries.
secondly
, companies benefit from free
information
 to produce new products
for example
IPhone
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 products which are more convenient for use.
Thirdly
, it helps to broaden knowledge and less cost for
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a student
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student
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 who goes to make research online for assignment
purpose
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purposes
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. Gathering
informations
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 promotes better education and better education leads to
better
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 future. It
also
help
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for
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individual
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an individual
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 to secure knowledge with little or no cost irrespective of
the
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class (rich or poor ).
On the other hand
, sharing
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valuable
information
 should not be assessed
free
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 because a lot of time was spent on collecting data and
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 is significant. People may find free
information
 insignificant, and misinterpret it to be a threat.
Thirdly
, there should be valuable
information
 which should not be shared
free
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. Again most free
information
 can give false reviews on
some
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certain cases. Again, with no free
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 students will be able to visit
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 school library to make research for their assignments and projects.
Also
, caution will be applied in the collection of data to avoid displaying wrong facts to people. In conclusion, it is beneficial to share
informations
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 free but
also
 we should consider the valuable and crucial ones that will be shared
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public
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • innovation
  • transparency
  • accountability
  • unfair advantages
  • misuse
  • valuable
  • protected
  • monetized
  • confidentiality
  • progress
  • safeguards
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