A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer
Dear Saman,
Hope
this
finds you good. I am writing this
in response to you asking for advice about camping in the holidays.
I am so glad this
time you have found some personal time since you are always busy with your profession. Camping in the summer is good because you are a born talent in photography. I am sure you will enjoy capturing the wonders of wildlife if you can go to Yala for camping.
Even though you might have some excitement while being in the wild taking photographs, you may suffer from the sweltering heat. So, it would be better if you can take some extra cloth to cover yourself while being outside.
I wish I could join you, but I am not sure whether I will be able to do so, because I have urgent work to complete at my office. Anyway, I will try my best to join you.
Let me finish here if you need any more details or information feel free to contact me on my mobile.
Warm wishes,
SupunSubmitted by sprabasara on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite