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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

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The chart provides information about the
consumption
 tendency for the most important fast food for three years in an Australian city. Overall,
although
 arguably surprising is the Salad figures, which, originally was the
last
 of the five fast food, it has a projection closed to fried chicken,
however
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 and hamburger remain far more popular than the other choices at all times.
In contrast
, Fried Rice and Noodles stay constant in their
consumption
. When looking in detail at the
units
 amounts and after two decades Salad would have had a rapidly growing in its
consumption
 passed from 5 in 2005 to 41
units
 in 2025.
Although
 Fried Chicken has been moderately soaring reaching 37
units
 sold in the present, its
consumption
 estimation for 2025 is going up to 45. Whereas
units
 of hamburgers eaten had been steadily falling in the present, the forecast estimates a recuperation in 2025 getting 51
units
 for 2025.
Finally
, Fried rice and Noodles maintain a similar
consumption
 behaviour in Melbourne,
although
 the number of
units
 had increased until the present, there is not a growing projection for 2025.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • policies
  • responsibility
  • health and well-being
  • education and awareness programs
  • childhood obesity
  • food advertising and labeling
  • unhealthy food
  • supportive environments
  • recreational facilities
  • collaboration
  • healthcare providers
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