These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for children. Discuss both views and give your own pinion

In Today's, world people are moving more to other parts of the world because of jobs and due to
this
they are taking their families with them and the people who are moving are having kids with them
this
can affect for some extent and
also
benefit. In
this
essay, I'll be discussing the merits and demerits of
this
and its impacts on children. To start there are several benefits for children when they move to other countries the
first
advantage is the child will get an international exposure where he will meet different country people and will have large friend circle.
moreover
, the child will learn different languages from a very young age which is good for developing more vocabulary
for instance
if the kid was born in Andhra Pradesh he will know Telugu and Hindi most and move to the U.S because of his father's work he will be learning English which helps him in communicating fluently
additionally
English is accepted in a wide range of countries.
On the other hand
, there are some demerits as well few of which are the kids can face an issue in foods where they need to adapt to the new environment for some it's hard
Furthermore
in the initial days of school he might face an issue of not understanding because of the speed that he need to catch up
for example
if the child is born in Spain and moves to England with his family
then
it will be hard for him to catch up English lecture as he was well equipped with the Spanish language. on contrary the climate will change will
also
affect. To conclude in my point of view there are many benefits for the youth while compared to the demerits because having international exposure will help him to have a big network and
also
not to mention that the youngster will be the happy and exciting cause of the travel he will be having.
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