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A gift(such as camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

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People learn and develop throughout their life. In today's
world
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 it is necessary to know how to
use
computer
 technology. If
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 were to give a gift to
child
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a child
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 that would be
computer
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a computer
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.
Computer
 plays an important role in
child's
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a child's
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 mental development. In
following
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 paragraphs
i
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 give reasons. At
first
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children
 can play a lot of mental games on
compuer
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computer
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 that help them
making
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better
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 decision, keeping patience.
Children
 can
use
internet
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 on the
computer
.
Internet
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 has numerous
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
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today's
todays
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 life. They can
use
 it to know about different countries, different cultures and travel destinations.
Children
 can
use
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the computer
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computer
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computers
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 for educational purposes. They can do a no. of online courses in any field they want.
Children
 can
use
internet
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the internet
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 to get resources for
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their
the
thier
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their
schools
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 projects.
Computer
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 has
also
 practical
benifits
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benefits
.
Children
 can get their
first
 job on
internet
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the internet
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. In
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today's
today
todays
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world
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 there are lot
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of
og
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of
 jobs in
computer
 programming for which people do not need to go
in
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office
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the office
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.
Children
 can work from home and enhance their skills for their future
career
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. To sum up, I believe there is
immense
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 need to know how to
use
computer
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a computer
the computer
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 because at every step there is technology. By knowing
computer
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computers
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children
 can
makes
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 their lives easy.
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