A gift(such as camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

People learn and develop throughout their life. In today's
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it is necessary to know how to
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technology. If
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were to give a gift to
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that would be
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a computer
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.
Computer
plays an important role in
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mental development. In
following
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paragraphs
i
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give reasons. At
first
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children
can play a lot of mental games on
compuer
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computer
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that help them
making
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better
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decision, keeping patience.
Children
can
use
internet
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on the
computer
.
Internet
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has numerous
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
in
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today's
todays
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life. They can
use
it to know about different countries, different cultures and travel destinations.
Children
can
use
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the computer
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computer
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for educational purposes. They can do a no. of online courses in any field they want.
Children
can
use
internet
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to get resources for
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the
thier
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their
schools
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projects.
Computer
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has
also
practical
benifits
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benefits
.
Children
can get their
first
job on
internet
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. In
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today's
today
todays
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world
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there are lot
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of
og
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of
jobs in
computer
programming for which people do not need to go
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office
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.
Children
can work from home and enhance their skills for their future
career
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. To sum up, I believe there is
immense
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need to know how to
use
computer
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a computer
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because at every step there is technology. By knowing
computer
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children
can
makes
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their lives easy.
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