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You are working for a company and need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - explain why you want to take time off - give details of the amount of time you need - suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear
Mr.
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 Smith, I am writing to request
for
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twenty
days
' leave in the
next
 month. In order to have
backup
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resource
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 for
a
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smooth execution of work in my absence, I wanted to have
an
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prior approval. As you are aware that I have a younger sister in my siblings,
I
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am glad to share that her marriage has been finalized and scheduled
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 the month of August. It is going to be
grand
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 ceremony in my home country for which my presence will be required there because
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 India, it is considered a bad omen to not have the brother present
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 their sister's wedding. At the least, I will be requiring 20
days
 off from work as I will be the one responsible for all the
prepartions
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preparations
preparation
 during
this
 event.
Moreover
, I have to stay back for
few
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days
 after concluding the function so as to see off all the guests. My responsibilities are even more significant as there is no one else to complete our religious rituals. While I will be in India, I would be available online for any critical situation.
However
, I have planned
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 my task to my teammate
Mr.
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 Kumar for routine
day to day
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 activities.
Also
, I will ensure to finish off all my
pendencies
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tendencies
 before the period of my absence. The invitation for the occasion will reach you in coming few
days
 and I would really
appreatiate
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appreciate
 your visit in my sister's wedding. Yours sincerely, Aman Malik
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
  • Time off, absence, leave of absence
  • Personal circumstances, compelling reason
  • Duration, number of days/weeks
  • Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
  • Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
  • Preparation, advance work, assistance
  • Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
  • Inconvenience, minimal disruption
  • Request approval, formally request
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