You are working for a company and need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - explain why you want to take time off - give details of the amount of time you need - suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Smith, I am writing to request

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twenty

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month. In order to have

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smooth execution of work in my absence, I wanted to have

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prior approval. As you are aware that I have a younger sister in my siblings,

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am glad to share that her marriage has been finalized and scheduled

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the month of August. It is going to be

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ceremony in my home country for which my presence will be required there because

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India, it is considered a bad omen to not have the brother present

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their sister's wedding. At the least, I will be requiring 20

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off from work as I will be the one responsible for all the

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after concluding the function so as to see off all the guests. My responsibilities are even more significant as there is no one else to complete our religious rituals. While I will be in India, I would be available online for any critical situation.

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before the period of my absence. The invitation for the occasion will reach you in coming few

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and I would really

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your visit in my sister's wedding. Yours sincerely, Aman Malik

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

247 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Respectful greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Manager's name],')
Time off, absence, leave of absence
Personal circumstances, compelling reason
Duration, number of days/weeks
Cover duties, delegate tasks, work handover
Alternative arrangements, contingency plans
Preparation, advance work, assistance
Gratitude, appreciate, understanding
Inconvenience, minimal disruption
Request approval, formally request

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