Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, While others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Education
is one of the pillars which helps any country to improve its economy. Some think it is important for any government to provide
education
for free whether they are financially strong or not. In my perspective, I strongly disagree with
this
statement because It is impossible for some countries to accommodate free
education
,
in addition
, students might take it for granted if
education
is given for free. On the one hand, native
languages
hold
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value of cultural diversity. To support
this
statement, a variety of speeches represents different cultures' identities and gives an image of their culture to the entire globe.
Moreover
, traditional
languages
help to preserve the history of society. Some epic books were written in old
languages
, and if old speeches were lost, they
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affect the history of the nation.
For example
, The Gita was written in Sanskrit and now very few
people
know how to read or speak Sanskrit.
On the other hand
, saving traditional
languages
is not feasible because with the help of a small amount of
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it cannot
achieve
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. It is because of the teaching cost of language.
In other words
, to teach the language, new educational infrastructure is needed
as well as
maintenance of
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and teachers is
also
required.
Furthermore
,
people
are not interested in learning less popular
languages
. Especially, youth is now more attracted to international
languages
such
as English and French, and
that is
because of globalisation.
For instance
, most multinational companies give first priority to English speakers, which can be used all over the world. In conclusion, it is true that
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traditional
languages
hold a value of artistic identity and historical importance.
However
, I personally think that the huge amount of cash from the national fund would be wasted by developing new educational structures and
along with
that
people
are more interested in popular
languages
.
Hence
, the government should invest capital in the basic needs of
people
rather than in language.
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