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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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 whether kids raised up in a normal economic family can perform better in coping with problems of adult
life
 than those cultured in a rich one. In my own opinion,
this
 is true as the former ones can be more independent and creative. There are a couple of advantages for those growing
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 a poor environment.
Firstly
,
such
surrounding
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 would force them not to depend on others. These
parents
 have to strive to support their families so that they do not have enough time to care about their children’s daily affairs, like studying.
Therefore
, these kids have to tackle the issues by themselves.
This
 can build their independence.
For example
, I was born in a rural area and my
parents
 have no idea
of
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 my school
life
.
Thus
, I have to allocate my own learning time and energy. It is the same for me in
adult
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 working
life
.
Besides
, the process of
self management
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 can promote creative thinking. Facing a lot of affairs forces us to think outside the box to find a solution, which can build a habit of consistent
considering
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.
On the other hand
, for those nursed in a rich setting,
they
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may more rely on their
parents
. Their folks may have more time to care about their
growing
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 and more importantly they may have experienced
the
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school
life
 so that they can give instructions and suggestions.
This
 may lead to that when coming across difficulties, they would resort to their folks.
However
, in
such
 a rich family,
parents
 can accumulate more social resources. These young teenagers may take advantage of them to solve their difficulties. In
this
 aspect, it may be
more
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easier for them. In conclusion, I tend to think children’s independence and pondering are the
key
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 to
solve
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 problems. Young teenagers raised in
a
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poor
surrounding
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 cannot rely on others to help them. Compared to those in a rich one,
although
 they may have more social resources, the former ones can play
more
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better in terms of facing issues.
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