Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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The temperature is about 28-celsius degrees, and the moisture is high. I have been living there for 28 years. My parent came there in 1994 when I was 2 years old. They bring me up there. It is a small town, called Kon Tum. It was separated from Gia Lai-Kon Tum province in 1992. It is located in the mountainous area, next to the Combodia and Laos borderline. Thanks to a lot of forest around, its atmosphere is very fresh,
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the weather is cool all year. Residents
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friendly, honest, generous, and happy. I love to learn about internal medicine and physiology. Well, when I finished high school, I really did not know which university I
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to study at. My parents and my brothers chose
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university for me. I work for a private hospital, I graduated medical doctor 6 years ago. I worked for some hospitals, both private and public ones. It is my fourth hospital. I think Hoa is the most common
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was in high school, there were many friends named Hoa. Well in my
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, parents often look through some
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or ask the elderly to seek some meaningful words for their children. In my
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, l believe that in most families fathers are in the position of naming their children. I guess it may be difficult because my
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relates to a lot of my papers. Of course, People in my
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pay great attention to their names
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they believe that suitable names will bring them good fortune. Sometimes they even change their names for their business and family purpose. In VietNam, I believe that fathers are in the position of naming their children I quite like my
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. It is a rare
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very meaningful to my family and to me. My father gave it to me, exactly my father and my granddad. Lanh means Honest,
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Thanh means peaceful. I believe that they hope for me to be honest and gain a peaceful life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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