A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter request advice about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing find out about the food

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Hi dear Sara I'm really glad about your invitation and I already booked my flight yesterday. I'll be landing there on 15 April at 14 pm.

although

I've started picking up my baggage so I was concerned if you could give me some pieces of advice about what to bring like souvenirs or clothes.

first

of all, I would like to buy some gifts for your parents.I remember you said your father is a real fan of real Madrid so I would buy him the uniform if you tell me his size.

in addition

,your mother has told me to bring her a new collection of Chanel perfume so please ask her she prefers sweet adores or cold ones.

Secondly

, I wonder if to bring casual clothes or formal ones so please recommend me,if we have some plans for sports activities or attending exhibitions or music concerts during my stay.

Finally

,it would be a little embarrassing to say. I've heard people in Denmark are keen to consume red meats but I'm allergic to all kinds of red meals so please tell your mom to be concerned about it. hope to meet you soon Masi

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7 paragraphs

193 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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