Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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really like to watch

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, especially comedy

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and action

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. One of my favourite

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is The Avatar, which

tell

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about the life of a species

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imagination

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planet. 13. How does the

weather

affect people (or, you)? (If yes, how?) 14. How do you feel when the

weather

is cloudy? I don't like rainy or cloudy

weather

. My living area has trouble removing water

due to

these tunnels being so small. And I feel annoyed

due to

wet clothes. 15. Do you always pay attention to the

weather

forecast? I rarely pay attention to the

weather

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and sometimes go travel, so the

weather

influences me a little. I often do not care about its forecast. 16. Can you give any examples of unusual

weather

? 17. Do you like snow? (Why?)

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, I think like snow. I have never seen snowy

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in person. On the internet and on the TV, I saw many people enjoying snowy

weather

with many activities

such

as skiing and building snowy statues. 18. Would you prefer to live in a place that has just one, warm season that lasts the whole year or a place with different seasons? I prefer to live in a place with the only warm season

due to

19. Do people in VietNam play the same sports in different seasons of the year?

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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1 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: give details about the concert describe how you won the tickets explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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