Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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really like to watch
films
, especially comedy
films
and action
films
. One of my favourite
films
is The Avatar, which
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about the life of a species
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planet. 13. How does the
weather
affect people (or, you)? (If yes, how?) 14. How do you feel when the
weather
is cloudy? I don't like rainy or cloudy
weather
. My living area has trouble removing water
due to
these tunnels being so small. And I feel annoyed
due to
wet clothes. 15. Do you always pay attention to the
weather
forecast? I rarely pay attention to the
weather
forecast. I live near my workplace
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and sometimes go travel, so the
weather
influences me a little. I often do not care about its forecast. 16. Can you give any examples of unusual
weather
? 17. Do you like snow? (Why?)
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, I think like snow. I have never seen snowy
weather
in person. On the internet and on the TV, I saw many people enjoying snowy
weather
with many activities
such
as skiing and building snowy statues. 18. Would you prefer to live in a place that has just one, warm season that lasts the whole year or a place with different seasons? I prefer to live in a place with the only warm season
due to
19. Do people in VietNam play the same sports in different seasons of the year?
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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