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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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in response to the letter that I received from your bank asking to confirm whether I received the bank

card

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that I requested a few weeks back. I did not receive it and now I am concerned about it.

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with, I will explain why I desperately need

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card

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. I was hoping to make an online payment by using

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card

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, it was the semester payment to my university. Now I am hopeless in doing that.

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, I am afraid of falling the

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into the wrong hands, because it has the access to all money that I have saved in the bank account.

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, I kindly request you to deactivate the

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as soon as possible preventing its misuse.

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, It would be great if you can assist me in paying the semester payment. I would appreciate your immediate attention to

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matter, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun

Submitted by sprabasara on Sat Jul 30 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

acknowledge receipt
compromised security
unauthorized transactions
identity theft
reissue
secure (the account)
fraudulent activity
account holder
security measures
customer service
follow-up
discrepancy
escalate the issue
trace the delivery
account security
financial risk
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