You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter, 1. tell them when you will be arriving and leaving 2. explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost 3. ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel 4. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Sarah. I am writing
this
letter to make a reservation at your seaside hotel. Along with
that
I would like to gather some information about the Add a comma
that,
activites
that are available near your inn.
I am planning to spend my vacation with my family in your hotel. We are four people Correct your spelling
activities
my
family including my husband and two children. We will be reaching there on 27th of October and will spend a couple of days there and will be leaving on 30th of October.
I am looking for two Change preposition
in my
ensuit
rooms with double beds. I would be delighted if I Correct your spelling
ensuite
en-suit
get
a room with a sea view. Wrong verb form
got
In addition
to that, can you please let me know the cost of those rooms on weekends.
I have seen Change the punctuation
?
in
your Change preposition
on
websit
that it Correct your spelling
website
web site
have
mentioned as £100 a nightVerb problem
is
,
But wanted to make sure whether the prices as mentioned in Remove the comma
apply
you
web application.
As we haven't Change the pronoun
your
came
to that place earlier, can you please let me know about the fun activities that are available for the childrenChange the verb form
come
.
Change the punctuation
?
Along with
that
I would be glad if there is any place that Add a comma
that,
available
near the hotel for hikingAdd a missing verb
is available
?
Please let me know if any information Change the punctuation
.
in
required.
Yours faithfully,
Sarah.Correct your spelling
is
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task achievement
Ensure all sentences are fully polished by correcting minor grammatical errors and typos (e.g., 'came to that place' should be 'been to that place').
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down the information into more distinct, clear paragraphs for each point to improve the flow and readability.
task achievement
You have addressed all the points in the task: arrival and departure dates, room type and cost inquiry, and activities and places of interest.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate, which suits the purpose of the letter perfectly.
logical structure
The letter has a clear structure with a logical flow of information.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are correctly formatted and add a professional touch to the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite