whwn choosing a job, salary is the most important consideration. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, society

tend

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to earn money for

comfortable

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life. One of the most considerable

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of choosing a career is its

salary

. There

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a lot of contraries

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which satisfaction is more important than

monetary

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part of the job. I accept

this

suit for many people but in general, I disagree with

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phrase which we consider

salary

as the most important reason to choose a job.

Firstly

, satisfaction can bring happiness and fulfilment to people in spite

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that

salary

can not guarantee your mood.

For instance

, if you have been chosen by the employer who has nice behaviour, respect for all employees and pays attention to them can make sense of self-satisfy and

also

workers get a responsibility to work harder and take care of the big target of his/her position.

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, if

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be

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a good industry and have

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to

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their post, their mind turns to empty of any tension relevant

about

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their career, so they can make

a

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better decision and enhance their creativity.

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, when they don't have any

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with another and have a passion for their work, automatically they tend to do the assignment in

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way and in ,conclusion

company

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can achieve

to

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his

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goal . For ,example researchers find their appointment because they like to do something for science and

also

can help human life. Other

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argued their ideal career doesn't exist and they live a pressured life just because of the monthly payment which their company gives to them. In sum part, I want to restate my opinion which

satisfiction

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satisfaction

is more important than

salary

because can bring fulfilment and

sence

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sense

of

responsibilty

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responsibility

for

employee

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.