In a number of countries some people think is necessary to spend large sums on money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on impriving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days a lot of

money

is spent on constructing new

railway

lines

for very fast trains between cities

instead

of improving existing public transport. Most of

this

money

comes

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form

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taxes, which means it is,

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in fact

infact

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in fact

, the hard worked

money

of society.

Therefore

it is important to question which investment is the most

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

.

Firstly

, new

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railway

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railway

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lines

might have a fewer impact on

Globalwarming

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Global warming

, as there a build to a completely new

standart

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standard

.While old

railway

lines

might only run on fossil fuels or oil,which are releasing tons of C02

emmissions

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emissions

, new

lines

will use green energy only.

Sunenergy

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Sun energy

for example

,

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has no or only very little impact on our planet. A Train which runs by the energy of the sun is

therefore

very

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

for our Planet as it helps to prevent the Temperature rise of the earth

On the other

hand

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is the

constructions

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construction

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of completely new

railway

lines

very expensive and takes a lot of time. To Construct a new

transportstystem

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transport system

can take up to several years and can costs millions of

Dollers

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Dollars

.

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for example

might be a burden for plenty

citizen

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, not only because the

money

could be spent on simply improving ….but as

these construction site

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might even cause more delays and issues in the old transport system as it would be if there would just

imporve

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improve

the old one. To conclude, the construction of new

railway

lines

is a helpful tool against global warming.

Nevertheless

am I of the Opinion that it is

money

and timewise more

benefical

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beneficial

to improve already existing ones. To a new

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standard

standart

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standard

.