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"I have had numerous times when I've thought,
this
isn't meant to be, but the thought of performing in front of a home crowd just made me want to push myself and achieve great things." Fraser entered the competition with a slick routine on the pommel and dismounted to a backing of raucous applause. The judges duly scored him 14.650, 0.300 ahead of Northern Ireland's Rhys McClenaghan, the defending Commonwealth champion on the apparatus. Tulloch, defending champion on the rings from the Gold Coast, extended
England
's lead with a controlled, confident display that earned a score of 14.700, comfortably eclipsing the rest of the competition. Regini-Moran top-scored in both the parallel bars and floor, with Jarman clear of the rest on the vault. The final word was fittingly left to Fraser, though. He stuck a superb horizontal bar routine on
England
's final rotation, top-scoring with 14.500. Fraser added: "I've faced so much adversity. Before the high bar, my coach said 'I believe in you', and that was exactly what I needed. "Sticking the dismount just made everything become real. Even with the injuries I've been managing, to walk away with that landing, I was just so proud of myself." The
England
team bounced together in a joyful huddle, but their celebrations were outdone by a delighted Cyprus team, who took a surprise bronze. Scotland and Wales finished fifth and sixth respectively. The team final
also
acts as the qualifying event for individual disciplines, with the top eight on each apparatus progressing to the medal events later in the Games.
England
's Jarman and Hall were the two highest-scoring gymnasts in all-around qualification, ahead of Cyprus' Marios Georgiou. Scotland's Frank Baines, who retired in 2019 but returned to the sport to compete in a third Commonwealth Games,
also
progressed.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • Finally
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