More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?
Day by day, the number of
volunteers
, who are going to poorer countries
from the young citizens of rich countries
, is increasing. In my opinion, the most important reason for this
is the feeling of spiritual satisfaction that comes from helping people
.
It is often said that money cannot buy happiness
. Indeed, although
there are no problems such
as hunger, poverty, or lack of education in wealthy countries
, this
is not enough to make everyone happy, especially the youth. The reason for this
, I think, is that material satisfaction is not enough to satisfy the soul while it nourishes the body. As a result
of that, people
seek happiness
in activities such
as teaching children who cannot go to school or building houses for the poor.
This
is invaluable to these communities. The children can learn something from volunteer teachers and people
have houses thanks to these activities. On the other hand
, I think not only one party but also
both parties benefit from these activities. Because while they improve communities' quality of living, the volunteers
also
feel the happiness
of being useful and helping people
. Moreover
, these help volunteers
to improve their social skills and cultivate positive traits such
as helpfulness.
In conclusion, the pursuit of happiness
drives young people
in wealthy countries
to help communities in poorer countries
, and this
is beneficial for both two parties. Happiness
multiplies when shared, and the increase in volunteers
is evidence of that.Submitted by ac.cankurtaran on
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