More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?
Day by day, the number of
volunteers
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countries
from the young citizens of rich Use synonyms
countries
, is increasing. In my opinion, the most important reason for Use synonyms
this
is the feeling of spiritual satisfaction that comes from helping Linking Words
people
.
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happiness
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although
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as hunger, poverty, or lack of education in wealthy Linking Words
countries
, Use synonyms
this
is not enough to make everyone happy, especially the youth. The reason for Linking Words
this
, I think, is that material satisfaction is not enough to satisfy the soul while it nourishes the body. Linking Words
As a result
of that, Linking Words
people
seek Use synonyms
happiness
in activities Use synonyms
such
as teaching children who cannot go to school or building houses for the poor.
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This
is invaluable to these communities. The children can learn something from volunteer teachers and Linking Words
people
have houses thanks to these activities. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, I think not only one party but Linking Words
also
both parties benefit from these activities. Because while they improve communities' quality of living, the Linking Words
volunteers
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also
feel the Linking Words
happiness
of being useful and helping Use synonyms
people
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Moreover
, these help Linking Words
volunteers
to improve their social skills and cultivate positive traits Use synonyms
such
as helpfulness.
In conclusion, the pursuit of Linking Words
happiness
drives young Use synonyms
people
in wealthy Use synonyms
countries
to help communities in poorer Use synonyms
countries
, and Use synonyms
this
is beneficial for both two parties. Linking Words
Happiness
multiplies when shared, and the increase in Use synonyms
volunteers
is evidence of that.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...