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The two maps illustrate changes made to a town between 1990 and 2010. Overall, over these years it is the tangible transition that considerable industrial development and natural changes were seen. Focusing on the Westside of the map, the river which divided
this
 town and ran paralleled
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from South to North underwent approximately half
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size and
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, a dam to produce electricity was constructed in 20 years.
In addition
, not only
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the
 various natural environment including the trees and the field in which wildlife dwell but
also
 the historic construction was completely removed and
thus
 some towers for energy production was created during the period.
On the other hand
 , from the West to Northside, a sizeable lake was added close to an accommodation by which the array of houses
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 for 2 decades . By the way,
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 homes were relocated
next
 to the river in the South where two institutions to produce energy was built over the two decades.
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