In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidences.

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plans illustrate the changes made to the park called Grange from 1920 to the present. Overall, it is the tangible changes that not only the recreation areas but
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, regarding the left side, the area where musicians played their performances has been changed into the space for an
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. In 1920, there were 2 gardens which have undergone a reduction in the number by one at present.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global Exposure
  • Diverse Cultures
  • Language Proficiency
  • Networking Opportunities
  • International Network
  • Enhanced CV
  • Personal Growth
  • Independence
  • Adaptability
  • Resilience
  • High Costs
  • Tuition Fees
  • Living Expenses
  • Homesickness
  • Cultural Barriers
  • Culture Shock
  • Recognition of Qualifications
  • Language Barriers
  • Social Settings
  • Academic Settings
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