Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

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would prefer to live in a traditional
house
or in a modern apartment building, I think, I would hesitate to answer. From my point of
view
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this
topic is
controversial
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one. In the following
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i
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will analyse both options, and present my view. Both options have some pros and cons.
Firstly
if
i
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consider modern apartment
building
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buildings
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, it is cheaper to live. The reasons are
apartments
are somewhat smaller than traditional
houses
. So
apartments
are easy to maintain.
Apartments
have fewer and smaller rooms, so
i
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do not need to buy expensive furniture.Whereas
generally
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houses
are with big lobby area and greater no. of rooms
that
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means a greater amount of money is needed to make the
house
impressive. Cleaning
apartments
is
quick
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process
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than cleaning a
house
in which there is generally
need
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of
house keepers
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housekeepers
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who make our pockets tight.
On the other
hand
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traditional
house
has
also
lot
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of benefits over
apartment
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an apartment
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building. In a privacy manner,
Apartments
are somewhat noisy whereas
houses
are
kind
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of peace centre because
apartments
are
more
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denser than
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traditional
traditinal
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traditional
houses
in their vicinity. In
houses
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we can make our own pool and gyms but in
apartments
, it is not possible. In
apartments
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we need to
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use
se
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see
common
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pool and gym. From my point of view, I see both choices
favours
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me in different phases of my life.
In
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the age between 20-
30
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i
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prefer to live in
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apartment
a partner
apartnet
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because
in
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this
age
i
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am unmarried so
i
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need less space to live and need to do household chores quickly and need more money to save or
for
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invest for my family. On the other
hand
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when
i
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am married and have more
persons
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in my family, I need
bigger
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space.
Becuase
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i
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hope there
is
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tons
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tones
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tonnes
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of money
i
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have at my marriage age, I need not
to
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worry
for
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the expenses to maintain
big
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the big
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house
.
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